Caligula's Launderette

Thank for both for taking a look at this. I've edited it again, but I am still playing around with the idea of what other clues I should insert to ...

Note, I wasn't saying that any of your analysis was wrong, just that pigs were an important motif in Lord of the Flies. ;) Hmmm, yeah. My two cents is ...

Thank you all oh so very much! :D Cameron, you might try looking for the internal rhyme that is in the first two lines. *HUGS Gummy* Yes! But this, I'm ...

When I pulled this up the other day, I was trying to remember which I offed from you, I went and attempting to revise. I realize now that when I ...

I know this comment is a little late, *grin* but here it goes. I have no idea what this is about, it was just a little bug that popped into ...

Really crap draft one, note: this is just part of chapter four cause it's so long. Yep all for smaur. :wink: CL. Guttersnipe Chapter IV - The Beautiful Life of ...

I love it, hon. Actually I think that line does make sense. Brava! How's that for being lame and nonconstructive? CL.

Well, so... I love you all, and thank you for your comments... *HUGS* Kerouac, know there is an interesting man, and even an interesting-er poet, and yes I know that's ...

Dear Claudette, So this is how one of these things goes. Everything that is a comment, suggestion and/or note by me is in bold, brackets, and violety. I thought some ...

Aww, how cute! The only problem I see is this- The tree it bore apples And golden apples were they! So, the King was furious When the fruits got stolen ...

Looks who’s back… and so soon. You don’t know how lucky you are. ;) Well, here I am again. Hope this helps. If you need any clarification on any of ...

Aww Hugh! :D

The Jester was my favorite of his, that and Along Came A Spider . I love when he pairs up with Andrew Gross. CL.

Hmm... yeah that is pretty incongruous. I am going to try and find another image that works better for that, Thanks honey. CL.

No problem hon, glad I could help. When I get some free time again, probably tomorrow I'll go through the rest. Ta, CL.